kite’s string remains…
il filo dell’aquilone…
Premio Letterario Internazionale Matsuo Bashō, II edizione, 2014 (primo premio)
a leaf falls on
bombardamenti in cielo–
una foglia cade
sulla propria ombra
Luca’s Lily Pad n. 16 del 3 marzo 2019 Leggi tutto “Cinque haiku di Rita Odeh”
Commenting on a haiku by Réka Nyitrai, published on Luca’s Lily Pad #16 (myhaikupond.com) on March 4, 2019.
are gaining weight…
ice covered trees
This haiku by Réka Nyitrai is a valuable and highly evocative piece of work set in a winter environment (fuyu 冬) that appears to be desolate (kareta 枯れた) and melancholic (according to the aesthetics of wabi-sabi 侘寂), revealing instead an strong connection between the author and the surrounding nature.
In fact, while the ‘icy trees’ in line 2 –deprived of their foliage– do not really change their real weight, the poet seems to feel an intimate burden that keeps growing and reverberating its effects outside her physical sphere. This is made particularly clear by the presence of the ‘too’ adverb (mo も) in the first line, which serves as a pivoting word in the overall economy of the poem. Leggi tutto “A Timeless Burden”